I
remember the grassy, sloped front yard of a house on Virginia Lane back home. The
blades of green, sharp. Chlorine and sweet flowers, pungent. I remember the
feel of giddy unknown hidden among the scenery, with memory of summer laced in
the sound of birds, memory of kisses on the black tar of the driveway, memory
of gentle hands down by the drain where I took care of a stray cat, once. I
remember the way the yard made things seem exciting and hopeful, stretched out
far past the reach of a young man’s bent leg, but buzzing in sync with his
contagious energy. I remember events of importance and events of no consequence
witnessed by a brick home. A pool waiting patiently in the back, lapping at the
sides of cement in a hope to entice me closer. But I remember the front more
passionately. I remember a house on Virginia Lane that had a beautiful front
yard with two cars in the driveway. And that means I remember him.
I like this, and I really get what you were feeling at the moment in your writing from your descriptions. However, I wish I knew a little more about this "him". Like, maybe expand a bit with a touch of back story.
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