My
first time experiencing the coastline was on a family vacation to Myrtle Beach,
at the happy age of nine; old enough to enter the ocean without having to hold
my mother’s hand but still too young to travel the boardwalk alone with my
cousins and siblings as they discovered the interesting city life. Still, the
shops and people were hardly what had my attention the first time I got to see
the edge of my known world.
Looking
out to the edge of the horizon when all that is visible is frothy blue water is
more minimizing than any set of mountains or plains. I remember the ocean being
vast on the side of being frightening yet alluring. The smell largely
contributed to the alluring part, and was so aromatic that it would be hard to
describe it in any way other than simply the ocean. Salty to the point of
having a taste in the back of my throat, it filled my nose and my mouth until
no other smell was able to permeate.
Also
unique to the ocean experience was the feel of the sand, not very similar to
the bagged grains that were dumped into my sandbox as a child. It was
deceivingly soft in some areas, until the bits of glass and shell worked to the
top of the piles and clung to my feet.
We already discussed this briefly in class and I'm looking forward to hearing from your classmates on it, so I'll be brief.
ReplyDeletePossible places for expansion:
1. Who's having this experience and is that person different from the person recalling it? How? And how the same?
2. Was there also something bizarre/odd about this trip? In what ways do even our clearest/cleanest/prettiest memories interact with memories that are less wonderful? Why? How? How do we deal with that? (I'm made to think about this because of your interesting ending place: the glass poking up from below the smoothness. . .that seems like a cool potential metaphor!)
Cool start.
DW
Emily,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a fantastic job setting both the scene at the beach and the background of the vacation. I'm interested to find out what this trip meant to you on a deeper level. Keep up the great work!
-Other Emily
Hey Emily,
ReplyDeleteI really like the descriptions you included. The "frothy blue ocean" really paints a picture for me. Maybe you can include more about how the ocean made you feel, that would be really interesting to hear a nine-year old perspective on that.
See you Tuesday!